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Peagreene replied to the thread Offering feedback on your first chapter.Ah, go on then, for a fellow neurodivergent. -
Peagreene replied to the thread Offering feedback on your first chapter.The thing to do now is act like you planned that all along
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Peagreene reacted to Failnot's post in the thread Offering feedback on your first chapter with
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Ah, no, but apparently it has some kind of numerological association which is actually a very fun coincidence -
Peagreene replied to the thread Offering feedback on your first chapter.The grandfather is called Docile Tertias, so I didn't know if you meant it like docile (calm and peaceful) and tertiary (third), and if...
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Peagreene reacted to Failnot's post in the thread Offering feedback on your first chapter with Like.
Ty for the review, when I do my look-back over my chapters i'll definitely work on some of this (especially the bit about the insulation)
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Peagreene replied to the thread Offering feedback on your first chapter.dude what's up with this landscape-ass formatting
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Peagreene replied to the thread Offering feedback on your first chapter.I don't like that this is all in italics. Despite the italics, I like this opening. There's tension bc of the silence between the...
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Peagreene replied to the thread Offering feedback on your first chapter.I want to query "writhing" here because that word suggests prolonged, continued movement, like writhing in pain. It doesn't fit with the...
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if you are used to writing based on inspiration I recommend looking up Brandon Sanderson's writing routine, he has cultivated a writing...
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Peagreene replied to the thread Offering feedback on your first chapter.This implies the world takes place in a world where Christianity exists. Which is fine, but is going to be difficult with world...
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Peagreene replied to the thread the whole thing "AI does all the work," is a myth and a lie here's why.yes.
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I’m going to take a nap-nyah. :blob_sleep:
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Peagreene reacted to Juia_Darkcrest's post in the thread the whole thing "AI does all the work," is a myth and a lie here's why with Like.
What is that saying.... We got our wires crossed somewhere. AI should be doing those jobs nobody wants so we can focus on being artist...