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Perhaps I have a different reading style idk. If I was approaching the chapter as an editor I'd go over it more than once and collate my...

I prefer writing my comments as I go as it gives an author an idea of my impressions as a reader progressing through the story. But feel...

Time to watch another hours-long deep dive on a show I will never watch.

My queer ass loves this I'm confused about the transition between flashback/exposition and what's happening now Is this wispy spirit...

I think you should take a step back, plan what you are writing, and make sure everything looks good. Hell, even your ':-' in the three...

Giving people the benefit of the doubt is always nice

If your work is AI, I'm not wasting my time on it. This doesn't read like low fantasy to me at all. It also has that feel of being...

Dammit, I hope it's the latter. AI is a fucking scourge on the earth. I've never used it to write anything so I'm not aware of its tells.

How can you tell it's AI?

I would read it before my original writing sessions so perhaps I should revisit it. Any feedback can be constructive if taken well...

Thanks for taking the feedback in good spirit - as I read it back I realised I picked out a lot of things, but I want to be helpful...

Thank you. I am American so I struggle with the dialogue. I will try to work on that. I have the latter book but will try to find Henry...

I tend to listen to just one song over and over again for hours (spot the autistic hah). At the moment my song of choice is Chains of...

Done! This is quite a sentence. If you read it out loud, it should be clear that it's not very easy to read. I feel like the whole...