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Ya have to hook the reader. Cast a line and reel them in. The best bait for ya to use is the crypto scam. Make sure to create your own...

Coming soon, the Non Fungible Novel

These can't even be considered true vampires. They're bloody leeches and [Lesser Vampire] scum. Not to mention, they are chronic lechers...

Bloody stalking vampires 😔

Her lips were red, her looks were free, Her locks were yellow as gold: Her skin was as white as leprosy, The Nightmare Life-in-Death was...

Add personal stakes and a down-to-earth background to make your readers care. For example, your protagonist is a poor, loving older...

See to me thats kneecapping your own story. The whole point is you want him to feel bad, or at least to grapple with something...

Well 'Shit quality' doesn't tell you a lot. Is the issue with action? pacing? character? Unless its something helpful there's no point...

It's actually not just an ESL problem, even native writers run into bits where they just can't get the sentence to feel right...

I did these three to serve as riddle-poems for my fiction. Ten points for any who can solve them without that context lol Puss she...

I usually use a glug of olive oil, and then let a wedge of butter melt into it before adding the meat.

It's just a number, but if your flip it, it's 999. So you're close to a thousand.

'666 Readers' - I have achieved 'Satanic Author' Status at last!

My partner has already gone to bed. Should I steal his chocolate bar from the fridge?

rough and irritating