I love creating puns. Wouldn’t want that to be taken away from me. But your way is totally valid too, in my opinion. After a few chapters, the title doesnt really mean much in terms of Reader attraction.
I just recently started one about a magic bookstore.
Its cute, cozy and i love it.
But its like waaaay easier to gain followers on lower effort fanfiction smut.
Don't already struggle with monetization and metrics. Write, gain readers/followers and just enjoy the ride.
If you force it, youll burn out and won’t have fun.