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NNihlith reacted to Makimaam's post in the thread Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open] with
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First impression: The synopsis is long, but it did give me a general idea about your work. From the start, I could tell you are... -
NNihlith reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open] with Like.
Fair enough. Please read my fiction. You can decide whether to continue or not after reading chapter 1. Or if you can't finish chapter...
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NNihlith reacted to Ellie_in_Pink's post in the thread Would like feedback on my first ever Action/Fighting scene with Like.
Short chapter? Perfect for reviewing. Let's crack this bad girl open and check what's under the hood! Clean up dialogue by merging it...
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NNihlith reacted to Frankey's post in the thread Trigger Warning or Content Warning or Mature Genre? with Like.
Trigger warnings are some pop psychology that mutated out of Tumblr. It should be ignored. I use the other ones.
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NNihlith reacted to MFontana's post in the thread Trigger Warning or Content Warning or Mature Genre? with Like.
The only warnings you'll ever find on any of my works are those necessary for website rules and legal compliance. I'm firmly of the...
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NNihlith replied to the thread Writing Prose quality check?.I like it. I'd just go over it a couple times, add, subtract, reorder etc.. I played with it a little bit. I'm not sure if this is...
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NThen you'll definitely want to read and study C.S. Lewis' style as a reference point. In particular, his Narnia series. He tended to...
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NNihlith reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Editing Revising Chapter 1 while webnovel is live? with Like.
Many writers rewrite early chapters as their narrative skills improve. Some see rewriting as a way to gauge their early and current...
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NNihlith reacted to Zagaroth's post in the thread Long explannations vs Fragmented sentences Need help with Like.
Alright, there is certainly more depth to the description, though jumping straight in at chapter 6 has left me confused about exactly...
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NNihlith reacted to FRWriter's post in the thread Long explannations vs Fragmented sentences Need help with Like.
I think the LN style is not the main problem. You need to work on grammar... badly. Your sentence structure is not only awkward, but...
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NNihlith reacted to Tsuru's post in the thread Long explannations vs Fragmented sentences Need help with Like.
Time for Tsuru to pull the sign for the Nth time (ppfft i love spamming it) : -go read more (best advice for any writer) to be a good...
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NNihlith reacted to Zagaroth's post in the thread Long explannations vs Fragmented sentences Need help with Like.
Your sample reads a lot like a script for a play or movie. The reason that scripts can be so sparse is that it is the job of the actors...
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NNihlith replied to the thread Adventure/Fantasy-story writers, how do you keep travel sequences interesting?.Depends mostly on how interested the journey is. If the story is about how they get there, then you want to write about that. If the...
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NNihlith reacted to CharlesEBrown's post in the thread Adventure/Fantasy-story writers, how do you keep travel sequences interesting? with Like.
Unless you want everything to be in the service of a greater plot, look to episodic television shows like Rawhide or Star Trek or Wagon...
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NNihlith reacted to Story_Marc's post in the thread Is your short story seen as incomplete? Here's why! with Like.
Newest video, nearly done with this set. And yes, I'm aware of what happened at the end, stupid thing didn't save what I input on volume...