Recent content by Nihilun

@Eldoria Thank you! Your constructive feedback really helped point me in a better direction, and it gives me something concrete to work on. I appreciate you taking the time.

Hey everyone! First-timer looking for honest feedback on my opening hook (Chapters 1-3) I wasn't sure about posting here, but I worked up the courage to do it. I've posted 13 chapters so far, but I wanted to reach out to get some feedback on my opening chapters specifically. Since I haven't...

A goddess gets kicked out of heaven and runs a bargain-bin guild with a vibes-only tactician and a professional arson enthusiast. They take myth jobs even the gods ghost, mostly to pay rent and avoid getting eaten by whatever ancient horror they annoyed this week...