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Hi! currently polishing a novel I started writing some time ago. It’s a psychological, supernatural, fantasy style novel, but thare are few part that focuses on trauma, identity, and fractured reality rather than fast action. If that sounds like something you’d enjoy, I’d really appreciate you...

Thank you so much for this feedback. Honestly, it made my day. I’m really glad the opening and nightmare worked for you. I'll keep it in mind about your suggestions. I'm also trying to lean more into Bia’s inner reactions. I don't have any beta readers for it. So thank you for offering to read...

Thank you so much for taking the time to explain this so clearly. I really appreciate how detailed and honest your feedback is. I’m still learning first-person POV, so advice like this genuinely helps me see what’s missing. ?

Thanks for reading and for the honest feedback! I did feel that the synopsis was a bit lacking, but I wasn’t sure whether it was okay to change it after posting, so your comment actually helped clear that up for me. I’ve already started fixing the chapter numbering as well. The novel’s still...

Hello everyone! I’m revising my novel and looking for feedback. The story is mostly first-person POV, with some mystery-style sections. If anyone has thoughts on the POV, flow, or overall reading experience, I’d really appreciate it! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2024312/veil-of-midnight/

I appreciate your feedback https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2024312/veil-of-midnight/

I’m also writing a novel you might enjoy — a mystery, fantasy, and psychological thriller with a strong emotional focus. It has a romance genre, and multiple POV. Sharing in case you’re interested. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2024312/veil-of-midnight/

Mine is a mystery, fantasy with psychological and emotional elements. You’re welcome to check it out if that sounds like your thing ? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2024312/veil-of-midnight/