Recent content by Naravelt

A time-traveler hobo who turns out to have killed his own waifu hits rock bottom and becomes a slave, but later becomes an adopted dad to a broken little slave girl, all while dodging a messiah job interview from a future emperor and just trying to find a place he can call home. But the buildup...

Noble Dark. I write one myself. The Grimdark story I remember most is the infamous Ideon. The way the story ends shocked me. I honestly think the writer was kind of crazy. This is one example.

I forgot three or four times that the character in the right is a boy, not a girl. Thankfully, the reader noticed and gave me suggestions to fix it

Trevor Philips from GTA V. Psychotic, violent, and unhinged. Spend one day with him, and you might not survive.

It feels more like a story about teenagers being traumatized by war and politics, while the robots are just there to sell plastic models. There was a 90s Gundam series where the protagonist was only thirteen and tried to save his mother. Then tragedy hit. He held it up and said, “This was my...

Well, I’ve never really had a horror moment in my life. I even slept in a hospital morgue for weeks. The rumors about that place weren’t true, and I wasn’t scared at all. But my mother would occasionally see strange things. One moment I remember clearly from when I was a child. Her ear was...

1. Indifference, a mysterious being that only the MC can see and hear. 2. It seems fun to become a cosmic troll that defies time and space, psychologically torturing the MC with sarcastic remarks, commenting on his dark side, and always saying, “My dear.”

Legend of Legaia on PSX. An old game from when I was a kid. The ending is a lie. The heroes celebrate their victory, then the starting village gets attacked by the reborn villain fused with an abomination. Everyone dies and turns into abominations. That is where the true final section actually...

Isekai if you read it near a truck

How do you usually balance pacing when posting chapter by chapter? I think this is quite hard myself, but I agree with Eldoria’s, CinnaSloth’s, and others’ posts above. Do you plan everything in advance, or let the story grow naturally? The important general events are planned from arc to arc...

never tried writing sports or smut, so....

Michael Bay movies inspire me to write Boom! and Lots of explosion scenes.

They might attack Vietnam first. I would say robots and clones are taboo for them. they might already have clone wars in the past :oops:

Their goal is to seek workers to work in their homes (nomadic spaceships).

Nope, writing one is easier because I can remember the story and the characters clearly, which helps me avoid inconsistency and stupid plot holes. I also have two more unpublished works. One is set in the same universe and is currently at eleven chapters. The other is unrelated and stuck at...