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    [Closed] Free Feedback from the Prince

    Would love feedback on my webnovel and the back cover. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/662580/muse-of-maven/
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    Controversial Summary Feedback [CLOSED]

    Here is the backcover, would appreciate critique and advice: A muse is the extension of a maven, the embodiment of one's ambition. At least that is what the necromancers of the Feather clan would have everyone believe... Aspect, Legna, Loa, Muse; they go by many names and have many uses. The...
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    Controversial Introduction Feedback. [CLOSED]

    Would love feedback on my webnovel https://www.scribblehub.com/series/662580/muse-of-maven/
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    [Free] Another another ai images thread

    Really appreciate the answer! Oh wow! They came out great! I like 7 and 9 the most, but they all look amazing! Thanks a lot! :P
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    [Free] Another another ai images thread

    What do you use to generate your AI art :? If you don't mind me asking. Could you make with fantasy style with plains at day as a background: A mageknight generating a lightning aura wielding a two handed sword with a ghost knight also wielding a sword behind her facing an unknown foe. But if...
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    Free feedback thread.

    Yeah, good point about making a cover. 1.5-2.5 thousand words, that's good to consider. All of this is very helpful, the backcover has always been hard for me. I'm attempting to get as much feedback on this before making sweeping changes, Although fixing the grammar is a good idea. Fair...
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    Motsu's free editing and feedback thread!

    Appreciate you taking the time to read and responding. I especially find point two and three helpful. Who is Chris and Liah? Where you talking about the conflict between Moreen and Nylah? Glad I was able to nail the atmosphere :p
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    First Chapter Analysis

    Would love feedback on my webnovel and the back cover. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/662580/muse-of-maven/
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    Free feedback thread.

    Would love feedback on my webnovel, feel free to post on the forum, I don't mind. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/662580/muse-of-maven/
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    Motsu's free editing and feedback thread!

    Would love feedback on my webnovel, please look at the back cover and prologue https://www.scribblehub.com/series/662580/muse-of-maven/
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    Would love feedback and criticism on my enslavement fantasy narrative.

    Appreciate the example, it was really helpful in illustrating your point, thank you for your time and advice.
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    Would love feedback and criticism on my enslavement fantasy narrative.

    Appreciate the advice, the mindset I had for the name dropping was demonstrating Moreen knowing the name of her men. When I have time, I'm going to read through the prologue a couple of and see how I can fix it :P But yeah, too many names requires too much energy from the reader that's a thing...
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    Would love feedback and criticism on my enslavement fantasy narrative.

    Recently I began using Grammarly after my grammar problem was pointed out, thank god for that app or else I'd probably have pulled my hair out :P Honestly this was also really helpful, Lioness and Gentle are both meant to be titles, there is this whole system of addressing most people within...
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    Would love feedback and criticism on my enslavement fantasy narrative.

    And here I believed stirring away from erotic content was going to be my most controversial choice. :p But yeah, I figured enslavement would be a rough selling point. Just considered that wouldn't be such a problem on this website. Thank you for taking the time to read and make a response...
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    Fantasy, Scifi, and Supernatural Please

    My narrative is a fantasy about the conflict between six factions, though the current book focuses on the skirmishes between two of them. An army of witches lead by a goddess wishing to reclaim her children goes against an order of necromancers that employ war familiars known as muses. Muse of...
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