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ive tried working this into chapter 13, i'd like to hear what you think! ( its been out for a while, but still) even negative reviews tell you something that you should change for the better imo. i just need to know if what im writing doesn't well.. suck if it does, ill change it to make it...

i dont know for what chapter this is feedback, but if it is for one of the earlier chapters then please read 12&13 as they are more of what i make now, i try to use paragraphs, but i dont want it to feel empty either. thanks for the advice though, ill keep it in mind

hi, i've been writing a series for a while, but i really dont know whether or not im going the right way with it. either way i'd just like some feedback on it so i know what to do better and what im doing good already. my series is called: the legacy of the avatar