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MFontana replied to the thread Trigger Warning or Content Warning or Mature Genre?.The only warnings you'll ever find on any of my works are those necessary for website rules and legal compliance. I'm firmly of the... -
MFontana reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Action Feedback (I don't know how to write it) with
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Here are some practical tips for writing action scenes (especially battles): First, describe the chaotic environment as the atmosphere... -
MFontana reacted to Rosica's post in the thread Action Feedback (I don't know how to write it) with Haha.
You learned a lot from @Louhi and @MFontana feedbacks. Now you are skilled enough to give a feedback of your own. For the OP, read...
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MFontana replied to the thread Need help with the introduction of the worldbuilding to a generic fantasy world..Ultimately; it comes down to the reading order, and narrative scope. If the story in question is the second (or later) in a series, then...
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MFontana reacted to expentio's post in the thread Need help with the introduction of the worldbuilding to a generic fantasy world. with Like.
I'm a bit in a creative dilemma. The issue is, I want to write something like an anthology that plays in one of my established stories...
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Plot is good, writing is good enough; overall, this has the makings of a great story. The only reason I see this story flopping is that...
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MFontana replied to the thread How are we feeling this prologue.Hey @MakBow, I'm just popping in to see what this is all about and have to say it's a vast improvement over some of your earlier stuff...
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So, I've finally written mt first chapter after my break, how are we thinking: (Just to clarify, he isn't the MC, just a person from the...
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MFontana reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread I really appreciate your response regarding the story of my novel. with Like.
Quick feedback after reading the prologue: Your writing isn't bad, and the flow is quite fluid. However, the narrative structure has...
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MFontana replied to the thread Need help with the introduction of the worldbuilding to a generic fantasy world..I'd say go for it. Give it your best shot and then maybe ask again for feedback once you've gotten things written and sorted out. The...
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MFontana replied to the thread Writing How to learn to write?.Tools that I use for writing: Notebooks Pens Pencils Wordpad (Word-processor free on all windows PC's) Google-Docs (secure backups)...
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MFontana reacted to c37's post in the thread Achieved 1k views!... and 81st rank in racism... with Haha.
:blob_hide: Don't worry, I am not a racist. However...
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MFontana reacted to c37's post in the thread Achieved 1k views!... and 81st rank in racism... with Like.
As the title suggests, I got my first 1k views! :blob_aww:and 81st ranking in racism. :sweating_profusely:
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Me caveman cannot read apparently :blob_pat_sad: . I'm also sorry for the mix up.