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What's the best and worst feedback you've ever received as an author?

He is just starting to review mine... I'm excited!

Agree. We need more polite and respectful people like him. :blob_aww:

The best? When @MFontana went through several chapters of one of my works, and did full-on breakdowns on them. He provided extensive...

As long as the feedback helps, that's all that matters. You're free to take what helps, and ignore what doesn't. It's your creative...

Thank you for taking the time to write such a detailed and thoughtful response. I genuinely appreciate the level of craft-focused...

I read the prologue so far, and had to put reading the next few chapters on hold for now (to focus on my own writing tonight). That...

Thank you very much for your insight. I'd appreciate anything you have to share regarding my story.

I'll take a look at the story later, so for now here's just some generalized advice with regard to the technical side of world-building...

If your goal is a print novel, then the delayed character intro might work to your favor. As a webnovel, though, getting the character...

I think drip-feeding the worldbuilding is the right way to go about it. You're not overwhelming the reader with information, and it...

Thank you for your insight. Mine is definitely a traditional print novel. At least that's my goal. I'm too slow-paced in my storytelling...

In my story, I originally spent the first few chapters world-building, and just about everyone told me this was not the best way to do...

Honestly, I feel like I brought a foil to a banana duel. :sweat_smile:

After all of that development, I kind of like them being platonic soulmates. They don’t have to be romantic with each other, just...