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I've always disliked sports fiction or tournaments... I've only ever watched two fictions. But that was a long time ago. Besides, why...

This would be hell to narrate and quickly become boring. I don't think this idea would make for a fun read. Would work for an anime, though.

Just had another idea pop into my head for a story. I don't have the time to actually write it at present with my other active projects...

For what it's worth, I'd read it on this alone.

It's just something I want to know as I'm writing a second novel to use as practice to train my third-person perspective since I suck at...

I appreciate your commitment above. We do need dark fantasy fiction that explores other worlds without disguising itself as another...

Yeah, tried both, and it's not letting me add the images from those links to the signature, so there might be something else going on...

I recommend using Google Photos. Google clearly offers a free service with ample storage space for personal images, with no time limits...

The image sources are discord ones at the moment, but I'll look into it. They're showing up fine on my end at present, so thanks for...

When the time allows for it. I only have a handful that I'm actively reading/critiquing as a means to help decompress and clear my head...

Glad to be of help. And just in case you weren't aware, the advice I gave is part of my own editing process as well, just tailored to...

Alright I will rewrite the whole thing and try to incorporate all the points you and el listed. Appreciate you guys giving your time to...

First of all, Thank you — I appreciate the blunt, detailed feedback. I can see you put time into this, and I value the honesty. Your...

Firstly; El has a lot of great advice. Take it to heart. She's already covered most of it, narrative-wise, so I'll stick to the...

Okay, that's better. I still don't like the NTR element in the prologue. However, if that's your artistic choice, I'll respect it. Other...