Recent content by Meyaow

I'm glad to here there are merits in my criticism, and there is no need for apologies, even if it's not up my alley I do wish to give people honest feedback when no one else will. As for the descriptive writer comment, I'm not sure if the way I learned it is practical, but when I was first...

Having read your first chapter, and being thoroughly honest with you, I can't say that I'm too impressed or that I know what you want to achieve with this chapter/story. However, this feedback I'm going to share with you comes from someone seriously unexperienced, please keep that in mind...

I'm not someone who you can take advice from and be solid with that, so please take what I say with a bucket of salt ready to douse yourself with as I'll be speaking on my personal thoughts of your first chapter. The Positives: - Atmosphere: I really enjoyed the overall feel of what I read from...