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Moot question as the picture is not an active link... :devilish: -
Is the fox girl a spirit companion? I read the occassional cultivation novel but still drawing a 50/50 if that is what is suggesting.
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melchi reacted to Representing_Tromba's post in the thread I'll read a couple chapters of your story and give feedback best I can [No Submissions Temporarily (I need to catch up on everyone)] with
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https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1165197/the-supernatural-case-of-an-accidental-time-traveler-volume-/ If you don't mind, I would... -
melchi reacted to foxes's post in the thread I'll read a couple chapters of your story and give feedback best I can [No Submissions Temporarily (I need to catch up on everyone)] with Like.
Once again, no one showed up for the flash mob in yellow and blue T-shirts.
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melchi reacted to Failnot's post in the thread I'll read a couple chapters of your story and give feedback best I can [No Submissions Temporarily (I need to catch up on everyone)] with Like.
What it says in the title I'm pretty new to this, but I think I can still be of some use I'll try to give meaningful and constructive...
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Hey, she found a SH novel somehow.
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Looks retarded.
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Finally, some real food.
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Chapter 8 is finished and it should be posted!
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melchi replied to the thread I would love to receive feedback on my novel..2nded on the hollow. Not really sure what is supposed to stand out, everything is kinda generic. Also, some em-dashes.... I don't...
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melchi reacted to greyblob's post in the thread I would love to receive feedback on my novel. with Like.
this is pretty good. the characters have personalities and the pacing is good. though some scenes feel somewhat rushed and hollow. more...
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Le gasp...! He's back!
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Do whatever you want. You can't make everyone happy. But you can make yourself happy. Hope this helps.