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melcastanet reacted to CountVanBadger's post in the thread What's your main writing technique and speciality?(Explained In JJK) with
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melcastanet reacted to FRWriter's post in the thread Looking for feedback on the Prologue of my work with Like.
It's totally not a genre I'd ever read but it's quite interesting. However you switch between present and past tense... or I'm just...
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melcastanet replied to the thread Looking for feedback on the Prologue of my work.I doubt you're mistaken! Thank you for letting me know this is an issue. I appreciate your input. Many books throughout history have...
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melcastanet replied to the thread Looking for feedback on the Prologue of my work.Hello, thank you very much for the read, and for the extensive review of it. I really appreciate it! Definitely, and thank you for the...
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melcastanet reacted to HouseDelarouxScribbles's post in the thread Looking for feedback on the Prologue of my work with Like.
Oh hey, I liked reading the story, and read a little past the prologue! Since you asked me about the prologue, I thought it was...
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melcastanet reacted to Lysander_Works's post in the thread If series includes [Suicide] tag, what are the specific guidelines? (see updated post below)) with Like.
Sounds like the right answer is, button off, include both mature tag and initial trigger warning to it. But as Melcomely says, am...
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melcastanet replied to the thread If series includes [Suicide] tag, what are the specific guidelines? (see updated post below)).I think people browsing stories that may be triggered by those themes are more likely to check the Mature Warnings that the tags. It...
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melcastanet replied to the thread Adventure/Fantasy-story writers, how do you keep travel sequences interesting?.Generally speaking, you have to think of what the traveling will do to the story. If it's just a connection between two locations, then...
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Hello! I'm seeking feedback on my first work, "Undo Her". You're free to skip the brief Preface of the story, but I've been posting it...
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melcastanet replied to the thread What do you use to write with?.Obsidian too. It's nice to have a personal wiki of one's world-building.
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melcastanet replied to the thread Do you prefer more detail, or less detail when it comes to the environment in a story..Well, it also depends on the pacing of your scene. A fight is less likely to require that detailed a description of the scenery than a...