Recent content by Masochisticbard

Hey thanks for your comment! Was a bit reassuring that the story itself was interesting at least. I had written the first couple chapters in past tense, though it seems I wasn't able to catch that myself, whoops. I can see how this is a problem. I did go into further detail explaining the...

Hey everyone! After browsing the site for a while and recently making an official account, I decided to rewrite up an old story I had written to share with my close friends long ago. The story is a bit everywhere and I would appreciate any feedback on how I could improve my writing style! I...