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Well said, king. Your crown is on transit.

Now look, the title is defiantly controversial but let me explain: (Honorable Mention: Romance Fiction is the true power fantasy...

A young man nearly gets his @$$ beat after doing terrible in a test, now he has a system that allows him to essentially become God, all...

Well, to add some context to the story, my MC is the reincarnation of , and he needs to find his soldiers that were scattered across...

Well, I mean, I call it necromancy, but that's not really what it is. It's actually supposed to be the exact opposite of darkness and...

I am quite fond of the necromancy power in any medium. I however believe there should be a price to pay for using such dark and wicked...

1. yes, make it obvious with the usual cues (Flashbacks, past info dump, etc) or you can do shockwave, ONLY if the story works with that...

How about a mixed approach? When summoning the soldiers, they are at full power like B but the summoning will fail or have lower success...

B just screams "Mana exploits incoming next update". If you want a RR-esque roflstomp powertrip, give your MC that kind of limitation...

Don't worry, you are right, it is The Jin-Woo Show, yes, similar to him in my novel.

A. When the MC takes the solider as his own, if the enemy was stronger than him, they can only use as much power at the MC's level so if...

Not bad. A huge step in the right direction This Part: "One foot stomped on the ground was enough to send a shockwave so heavy Ethan’s...

Thank you for this, is this a better version? (Giving extra context since a lot of people think it won't fight when I kind of wanted to...

Y'all tell me what you think. Is this tuff? Context While pushing open the heavy door, a heavy gust of wind brushed against his face as...

Not really going for comedy, but I don't want to make my novel all serious, you know, sprinkle a little funny stuff here and there