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So is my novel, the MC is a slime, and, in my universe, slimes are well known for being able to adapt to anything as well as copy...

Ag Agreed(y):blob_cookie: I would go as far to say I prefer criticism if anything. I don't give a damn about glaze or praise because...

No, no. You gave good feedback. These are things I need, so don't feel you offended me because you gave me an honest critique. :blob_cookie:

Just read your prologue! I'm pretty beginner as a author, so I hope you can accept my humble feedback (*ᴗ͈ˬᴗ͈)ꕤ*.ﾟ First, the...

I'll just leave this here...

1. Hardest thing about writing fight scenes is avoiding too much repetition, b/c no matter how awesome fight scenes are, they get boring...

The hardest part I'd say is matching the physicality to the internal conflict your main character is going through, how the fight...

I will share experiences but know that this may not be the advice you are looking for or need. So a disclaimer that this is my opinion...

1-Go find a movie with a fight scene, preferably one that matches your setting. 2- Watch the scene all the way through. 3- Watch it a...

Ah. That's a writing style question. I usually prioritize dialogue and action myself. I rarely use metaphor in fights. But that might...

Well, there are many aspects to analyze from a fight scene. But I will focus on one thing: visualizing the fight scene that is easy for...

(Dialogue, Action and Metaphorical Description)

1. Making my vision clear. I can usually picture scenes easily in my head, but translating that into words is always a challenge for me...

1. What is the hardest thing about writing a fight scene? 2. What do you do to make sure there is a good balance? (Dialogue, Action and...

For what it's worth, I'd read it on this alone.