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Please read mine. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/

It was urban fantasy but it's not inside a city yet. Would you like to try...

Hmm, as if AI could write.

A very loooooooong chapter. I get why you want to put it that way. You don't want to leave it as a cliffhanger. Anyways, your scenes...

46 chapters, so which chapter is the action scene? I only came here for the action scene, not skimming through every short chapters.

First off, if the mc is a fighter, he should've noticed the staff right at the beginning. Everyone knows what is a staff, so you don't...

Somehow mine starts with a dark fantasy. Perhaps a little bit of horror and mystery...

I would like to have a try. Was wondering whether my 1st chapter is catchy or not...

I would like to try. I made a different approach by removing the old prologue. Not sure whether it's enough to catch your attention...

I would like a review. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/