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Your title isn't provocative enough. I thought this thread was asking for feedback. It's the opposite. Please change the title to...

Let me tell you something. Most new authors don't really meant it when they asked for feedbacks. They just want someone to read their...

Hello. I don't mind if your feedback is harsh or tearing me to shreds. Aside from the cover, I would like the synopsis and at least the...

Ignoring the note. No idea because I haven't have a so-called final boss yet. At most, you can called it the final boss of every arc...

Details, logic checks and filling in the plot holes. The hardest part for me is to do a logic check in mind to cover the plot holes...

Writing smart characters and smart schemes. ? How do I, a certified eejit, write a big brain character??

You can be less polite about it you know? Let me provide a feedback that feel appropriate to the text. This isn’t really a story, it’s...

Are the kingdoms, geography, and characters merely backdrops, or do they come 'alive' in your story? A good story is one where the...

Newest sketch sample. Signature as proof.