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I had to rewrite over 136 chapters because Macha told me my narration sounded like an attempt to emulate some Chinese open-world gacha...
Feb 9, 2026
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It's right. But I agree with his statement: As a author... I've also faced this dilemma. I even had to rewrite over 50 early chapters...
Feb 9, 2026
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Feb 9, 2026
Louhi
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But the most important thing is to write it first. You can make it good later...
Feb 9, 2026
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Honestly, this is helpful. But as an author... we might be forgetting a important thing: "cognitive bias." Authors often struggle to...
Feb 9, 2026
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Thank you for the recom, @Louhi :blobreading: Also, something's wrong with my notifs. I wasn't notified of this until I went here.
Feb 9, 2026
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Well, reading my chapter is an option, not a requirement. It's easier to demonstrate a concrete example than to theorize abstractly. In...
Feb 9, 2026
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I'd rather do what he asked to do to sharpen a knife than stand aside and comment on other people's work.
Feb 9, 2026
Louhi
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This is Macha being gentle. You don't want to know what she can do if she is actually being cruel. She make Tempokai sound nice...
Feb 9, 2026
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And to add onto @Eldoria offering a chapter as an example, @Macha did direct the fella to a beginner's guide, so... yeah. :blob_okay:
Feb 9, 2026
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Using another person's thread to make people read your story. Smart and subtle. More authors should do this. You know what else more...
Feb 9, 2026
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Since I only read TL EN to JP light novels, Alex Rider books, and then CN webnovels, I never seen em dashes that frequent, or even at...
Feb 8, 2026
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You are correct ✅ Em-dash usages aren't signs of AI-usage—Em-dash usages are signs of my superior writing skills.
Feb 8, 2026
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Don't forget to add em-dashes to your first post on the threads—like this. And emojis ??
Feb 8, 2026
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This is what a real shameless self-promotion looks like: Feedback Title. Rinse and repeat until the mods yeeted you from starting too...
Feb 8, 2026
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