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Tricks for Building the Living Dialogue The first trick is to imagine the conversation as real dialogue, put yourself in the... -
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Misleading thread title but... To answer the question - consume a variety of media and not just one type. See what works and what...
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lizzyrose reacted to Bimbanana's post in the thread What makes you stick with a story after the first 3–5 chapters? with Like.
"Engagement" definitely. What makes the story engaging? Either the plot/stakes, the characters, the worldbuilding, the dialogues, the...
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lizzyrose reacted to Emotica's post in the thread What makes you stick with a story after the first 3–5 chapters? with Like.
If I made it to Chapter 3, then it would just be a matter of likeable characters and an engaging plot.
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lizzyrose replied to the thread What makes you stick with a story after the first 3–5 chapters?.It’s kinda funny how it all just comes down to immersion. The moment something starts feeling forced or repetitive, you just… lose...
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Go to edit your signature. Click on the image, and insert a link to your novel with this button. You just have to copy the URL from your...
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lizzyrose commented on RepresentingEnvy's profile post.Thanks:blob_aww: I didn't notice
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lizzyrose posted the thread What makes you stick with a story after the first 3–5 chapters? in Reader General.What are your favorite ways to make dialogue feel natural and engaging? Any tricks for keeping conversations interesting without slowing...
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My dad was a sailor. Everytime he caught me sneaking in the house at 3AM, He always shaking his head and say: "Whale whale whale..."
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lizzyrose replied to the thread Username and Avatar.Named myself Lizzyrose ‘cause my FF account auto-generated Rose and I wasn’t ready to drop diamonds to change it. Was gonna go with...
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She forgot how to act normal… how do you stay quiet when your heart screams his name? When Silence Learned to Speak is here, and the...
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lizzyrose replied to the thread Writing Prompt How would your MC react when put in a horror movie?.My MC in a horror movie would be terrified but trying not to show it, making jokes to cope—like muttering, “Yeah, that chainsaw totally...
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lizzyrose replied to the thread I would Love Some Feedback.Thanks for checking it out and sharing your thoughts. I see what you mean about the pacing and the quick emotional shifts, I’ll keep...
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I only read the first chapter, but I'll still try to answer your questions. 1. Pacing - i agree with what others have said, it feels a...
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lizzyrose replied to the thread I would Love Some Feedback.Thank you for reading and for the detailed feedback, I really appreciate it. I understand what you mean about the pacing, especially...