Two.
My story is slice of life so it doesn't involve lots of gore, though there are some.
But I does involve lots of cuss word, so I added strong language.
As I said I am back with the feedback. (Little busy with my novel).
It seems you have changed it quite a bit since I last read, even after a casual read it's not confusing any more.
Over all a good start and good work.
I gave chapter 1 a read! ...
I’m a bit confused at the moment, so I want to read it again to make sure I didn't miss anything.
I'll edit this soon with more feedback!
Feedback:
I read your first chapter, and overall I think the concept is genuinely interesting and has a lot of potential. The...
I usually just pull my titles directly from the sentences or words I've already written.
For example:
Chapter 24: Since when do we stock Guava?
Chapter 25: I am just a cat
No, it just arranges in the sequence you upload. So you need to give numbers.
And it's actually good in some cases like if you want to you can name the chapter like "chapter 1.1"