Recent content by Lenosaul

Thanks for the feedback. Thank you everyone for your feedback. I really appreciate it and will adjust my story accordingly. It’s nice to see the perspective. After rereading everything, I can now understand that my story is a bit ambiguous and it would be hard for readers to follow without...

Hey guys! Here’s a link to my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2240492/sovereign-believers/ I wanted some feedback on my first chapter. If you love action fantasy and adventure, I hope you’ll enjoy this. Here’s my first Chapter. What do you guys think? CHAPTER 1: I’VE HAD ENOUGH...