Recent content by Lazytruly

Im not kidding, you should feel the difference in the successive chapters as i tried to be less descriptive and write more monologue and dialogues

Nah, besides as i said the idea is to improve writing so using ai apart from grammar defeats the purpose for me But never really written before the only things close to are essays for exams that to mainly science focused thats why it looks closer to chatgpt than human I guess?

Thanks for the review , as for chatgpt I really dont use it apart from grammar coz im not a fan of ai slop myself but I got 0 experience in writing and cant point out the issues myself either The idea was to experiment with ffs before I try some of my original ones if at try it

Honestly the slice of life atmosphere in the story is very strong that im reacting it to like a vampire towards sunlight after reading all those chinese ffs. I felt the mc didnt match her age when reading tho. Rest all felt good and a bit descriptive but lacking an energy?

Synopsis and frankly anything isn't my strong point at this stage,hence looking for reviews.

Like now?

I read your story , Eldoria has basically summed up any useful advices at this stage Pov shifts and pacing was a bit too vague and displacing for me affecting the immersion into the story or world

Well roast is better than silence ,as long as it improves the dao even poison isn't medicine Try this and give your honest roasts, constructive ones https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2238651/demon-slayer-the-jinesis/

Fellow daoist Please enlighten me of the flaws and gaps in the my ways of literary Dao Do test this poison as it is my first attempt at writing such scriptures before I start on my original stories Ps.its a demon slayer fanfiction with an oc Id like help and reviews on the pacing, clarity and...

Im not using it so I wouldn't know but dont people still support their fav authors or something even if they are writing fanfictions? That's what I see especially authors on webnovel or ff.net

No one said about it becoming norm, as for legality and morality, well its not exactly my place to judge. People who pay on patreon also know all these i guess

Ai using makes it easier, but again your growth as an author and even your own creativity might get stunted. I used ai to mainly check grammar and smooth things out, but ai later starts adding its own opinions and slowly the story becomes something else entirely if you overrely on it basically...

Meh well id have judged too but a Lotta people doing it, heck 50 shades of grey came about like that

"I would have shouted slurs at you, but I dont enjoy shouting at lesser mammals,not to mention Peta would sue me for animal cruelty "

You could always repost the story on other sites with patreon link?