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    Story feedback for my novel The other side

    whoa hahahaha I actually start rewriting some dialogues right now thanks to the comment on my other post but thanks to your insight here I will try to check those out first on how they work XD. As expected dialogues are a bit of a problem to me right now since I can imagine how they talk but I...
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    Story feedback for my novel The other side

    Never thought of that. Now that I think about it... that's true.
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    Story feedback for my novel The other side

    Thank you! As expected I have trouble with dialogues. As for that explicit scene I have a reason for that and it's a bit spoiler. Basically her ability is the mirror and the mirror reflects the true you but each ability of the lost ones are twisted in some way. Take the cursed diary/cursed note...
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    Alright. Please try my story. I'm kinda in the mood to get roasted like a donut. Title: The other side
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    Story feedback for my novel The other side

    So yes I tried writing one after reading many times in this site. I got tempted to test out my ideas but the problem is I know I am having trouble writing dialogues. I can visualize how the characters talk but I don't know if I write it well so I'm hoping someone can give me a tip based on the...
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    I'll review first chapters... ?

    I noticed this post while reading at forum and decided maybe I could try it as well. If it's not much trouble please try reading mine. I'm still new at writing and hoping to hear some insights specially on how dialogue works in mystery type of stories. The work is titled "The other side"...
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    I need help in genre

    I'm not sure if 24 is already counted among those two but I can feel you. Taxes really make you mature forcibly XD
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    I need help in genre

    this is actually very helpful and it seems adult and mature is the genre I'm looking for. Thank you for your help
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    I need help in genre

    Great day everyone. First time writing story in general and new user here(I only read in this platform before so I want to try writing my own as well.) and I know it's a little weird but my question is should I add smut genre if I plan to add some r-18 scenes despite the fact that those scenes...
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