Recent content by laccoff_mawning

Please do. I've been made aware that the first chapter is somewhat exposition-heavy, and I'm planning on cutting out a few paragraphs on information if necessary. I don't know if this is too much to ask, but if possible, I'd like feedback on what paragraphs feel boring to read through.

I ended up judging by both content and prose. the "as well men ask what they think of stone" definitely deducted a few marks, but even if that sentence was replaced with something nicer on the eyes, I still think the content of the crumbling stone is better than war being described as the...

I'm gonna guess that . Oh well. I got it wrong.

The only one I chose AI for was the first one. Which I'm completely okay with. Since an old crumbling building is much cooler than someone's weird take on war.

I write too slowly to do that kinda stuff. I did try it last year (or maybe two years ago?), thinking of releasing a chapter every April fools day, but I was still too slow to finish the chapter before April came around.

I can't say I was ever more angry than a normal person as a kid. I remember a specific point in life when I learned not to lash out and control it. Ever since then I think I've have pretty good anger control. When I'm frustrated, I'll raise my voice if it's at someone, or my footsteps become...

Then I'll jump in. Does anyone remember Aisling a while back? These are his two threads he posted: https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/“-zhuangzi’s-butterfly-–-sci-fi-fantasy-multiverse-adventure-”.24792/#post-568404...

Currently, I got two I can think of for different antagonists. The main inspiration from them is found in their visuals rather than character. One is The Kingpin, the other is Hobgen from Dota Underlords.

Yup. Feels very generic. I'd suggest you start having the cult sacrifice babies on altars to remove the sins of the congregation, or maybe some sort of frequent summoning rituals to bring some sort of monster into the world if you want something slightly less dark.

More polish. 1. This is dialogue. It needs quotation marks. 2. I don't even know what this is. Did he drop his phone? Is he internally screaming? Did he almost sneeze? It's very unclear. In fact, the first part of the story (before explaining star maiden) is generally very unclear and...

maybe it's 50,000. If so, this thread's pretty close to having a winner.

What's the maximum number of replies a single forum can hold?

I'm confused. Does this mean that they are no longer just shadow-banned? But are now actually banned-banned?