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I’m not very familiar with Nagano Prefecture.

So thank you for such a great take on my chapter and all your questions are really good pointers too. That will all be explained in...

Thank you very much for taking the time to read my work and for providing such thoughtful feedback. Your comments about the parts I...

Dude, I’ve read the first three chapters. And I’ll say this honestly… sorry, but your narration is still vague, which makes the scenes...

Thanks so much, I'll make the needed change. And don't worry I need all the suggestions I can get, I'll keep improving and keep getting...

I think the main issue for me was pacing. The opening blackout scene has a strong hook, but it feels a little too extended before the...

I really enjoyed the reveal in this chapter. The transformation scene was the moment that stood out the most to me, and it made me...

Could you please check out my novel boys gang.here is the link. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2063982/boys-gang/ I would really...

Hello everyone, I’m looking for feedback on the opening three chapters of my story HELL’S RETURNERS. It’s a dark revenge action story...

Wow, I genuinely respect your effort here. Hats off to you, mate!

It might be none of my business, but I’ll post the link on your behalf. I want to use my time as productively as possible...

Just a small note from a Japanese reader: The name "Hihiko" sounds a little unusual in Japan. Names ending with "-hiko" do exist (like...

Thank you for your honest feedback.:blob_salute:

Thank you for the clarification. My interpretation came from several details in the chapter. The poison Reynard took is not clearly...

1. Since Captain Reynard is already dead in the present timeline, I felt that the narrative might be skipping through time. The chapter...