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Ouch... I didnt know the bottom one was there... i forgot how bloody bright default was

You're welcome, and as long as the critique helped you with something, then it served its purpose. You've also clearly learned something...

I guess I now understand the preference aspect of first vs third person. Most of the novels and stories I read are in first person. When...

Yeah, it's a preference. Honestly, reading something primarily in first person is really, really weird to me. Most novels I have read...

My FF is a world hopper, and after the initial getting the MC used to this idea, I have been writing 80k+ word stories in each world...

I didn’t say I’m the one taking it. 😏

How could you not want to crack Eren’s titan form?

Corrupt, inhumane, demonic. These are some of the words used to describe the desert city of Bashaar, who's Zarr ruled over the city...

Every scene is different. I have a mixture of melee combat, magic combat, firearms, and even giant robots. If you are going to write...

This is all the reasoning you need to keep it SFW. Writing things you'd rather not write will likely lead you to burnout. This site...

Then keep ot sfw :blob_evil_two: no harm in that, some readers would appreciate that. Lot of users aren't searching for smut here, so...

/shrug It all depends on what you want. If you're not really 'feeling' the smut, then don't smut... fade any of the scenes to black, or...

Don't worry dude, If you can make it last more than 30 minutes that means your pacing is fine 👌

My will to read this exhausted by the point where you start on something like lewd fluid extraction something like that. Without the...

Because it's all first person and in chopped up sentences/paragraphs... This should be done mostly from third person, with only some of...