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You can thanks the two published authors you quoted for their feedback by buying their books from Amazon.

Under the lens of what you're aiming for El, this bit is exceptional. You're hitting all of the beats you're after to build visual...

I understand what is going on but it feels like a Manga panel rather than a cinematic movie. It feels like a list of actions but that is...

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You will find his feedback constructive. This is because him and M.G Driver is the same being.

Lecture... please tell me you don't visualize your written material as a lecture? I didn't or else I would've dozed off. :blob_sleep:

No problem... you just answer the scale option 1 for hard to imagine. An honest answer is the answer I'm looking for. This is...

Not necessarily an overuse of a single word. I tend to add "though" at the end of a sentence instead of the beginning, where it actually...

I would hope they comment on that in the chapter. :sweat_smile:

No worries... but... if I, or one of your readers, can't read it easily, how would you expect an honest assessment of the scene?

Being unapologetically myself, and delivering that same tone in my stories, through my characters. (I consider this a strength, but I'm...

I am the opposite of A-Random-Writer. I made it about 1/2 the way through and lost the thread. The fight might make sense, but the...

Nooooooooooo. I didn’t consent!!!! Grape grape!!!!! hey! You should feel honored. A monkey only has so many hairs. ??? imma pluck you...

Can I also add a 2nd thing? No? Too bad still am I am not afraid to hurt my MC, reducing his plot armour to just not... ending the...

The crisp, glistening golden brown duck of course