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@SurfAngel_1031 Thank you so much! This is already a good point for someone trying to write something for the first time in a different language. I wrote it in mixed languages so I had to translate later and edited it, so maybe wording and structure feel a bit off for someone experienced in...

I have fixed the final line to tease it a bit. What about the actual story, do you guys have any feedback?

Thank you for your feedback, I'll think about it seriously

Hello, this is my first ever novel. I'm not a native speaker so I don't have high expectation. Tell me what you think. Much love. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1666480/cultivation-starting-with-treasure-gathering-bowl/

My first ever novel. I'm not a native speaker so I don't have high expectation. Roast it. Much love. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1666480/cultivation-starting-with-treasure-gathering-bowl/

Hello, this is my first ever novel. It's something I work hard on. If you can give me some feedback it would be nice. Much love. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1666480/cultivation-starting-with-treasure-gathering-bowl/

Hi, this is my first ever novel. As I'm not a native speaker, I don't have much expectation. But I work hard for it and would like some people to give feedback. Roast it. Much love. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1666480/cultivation-starting-with-treasure-gathering-bowl/

Hi, this is my first ever novel. It's nothing extraordinary, but it's something I work hard on. Please toast it. Much love. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1666480/cultivation-starting-with-treasure-gathering-bowl/