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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and for your thoughtful feedback. Your comments helped me notice areas that would...

Telling people to use ai detectors if they want, but have mentioned in the past that they're unreliable? Neat. I'll do it too. Nice

I liked the opening with the fly landing on her eye a lot, but after that the protagonist started feeling kinda unrealistic to me. If I...

Glad you enjoyed and understood what I'm going for~ She's just a normal girl in a normal world doing normal girl things. Thankies.

well, I'm really excited about the future of your story!

I'm glad you did. And it's fine if you're a little biased, as long as you're acknowledging it. Also yes, that actually makes perfect...

I do like the comedy presented here. A wee lad giving advice on comedy, written in a way that reads like you gave chatgpt a prompt. I...

yup, and you offered great advice. My comment was half a joke, and half reminding people not to overthink comedy too much :)

Writing comedy in prose can be tricky—but it’s also incredibly rewarding when done right. Here’s a breakdown of some techniques I used...

I'm a firm believer that if you consistently write something good, viewership will follow. Usually around the 20-chapter mark. Unless...

How to write comedy (my way): write something you think is funny. Read it again --> is it still funny? Good job, then it's probably funny.

lol, i liked that. Anyway, just a heads up: I might be a bit biased because your story has a most of the things I like in it. (it kinda...

okay. glad you took this well, and im not happy to hear you get called schizo, because i end up reviewing a lot of people who work the...

I would but I do not know the game “SCP:CB” ? Looked it up on google and it seems like a horror game; maybe have the protagonist make a...

Thank you so much, i’m really happy with the result!