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Jay_Nyctbloom replied to the thread New author looking for feedback on first writing attempt.Thank you for your feedback. While writing the first chapter, I spent more time wrestling with POV and tensing than I did writing it... -
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To be honest I was impressed by how well you write this story based on chapter 1. For me the pace is perfect, and you narrate Sophia's... -
Jay_Nyctbloom posted the thread New author looking for feedback on first writing attempt in Story Feedback.Hello to anyone who may pass by this. I am an amateur writer who decided to start because story crafting DND was too much fun for a...