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I'm lazy and having a few drinks. Like others above, can confirm it reads like AI. Those short, staccato sentences are annoying. Avoid...

I'll be honest with you. Your chapter is not interesting. I have a hard time visualizing this scene and feeling neutral. Some things you...

This is a screenplay, not a story. Try writing more story, and less- it's not interesting, and incredibly annoying to have to keep...

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share such thoughtful feedback. I really appreciate how specific and constructive your...

I’m also a newer writer, so take this with a grain of salt — but right now this reads more like a teaser/synopsis than a fully lived-in...

@IGEN Not gonna touch this because I'd just be repeating what is already said by others. But what I will do is offer a big piece of...

Hi everyone! ? I’m a new writer and I recently started working on a dark fantasy / action / emotional story. I’d really appreciate...

Thanks for the insights! I agree—writing what I’m best at matters most, and mystery should intrigue rather than confuse. I’m aiming for...

My protagonist is both ruthless and easy to understand, yet his past remains the biggest mysteries in the book, that keep my readers...

I prefer you just write what you are good at. Don't let readers dictate all the things you do.

Hi everyone! I’m currently working on a dark fantasy thriller with heavy action and mystery. I wanted to ask: Do you prefer a silent...