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I'm lazy and having a few drinks. Like others above, can confirm it reads like AI. Those short, staccato sentences are annoying. Avoid...
Jan 4, 2026
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I'll be honest with you. Your chapter is not interesting. I have a hard time visualizing this scene and feeling neutral. Some things you...
Jan 4, 2026
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This is a screenplay, not a story. Try writing more story, and less- it's not interesting, and incredibly annoying to have to keep...
Jan 4, 2026
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share such thoughtful feedback. I really appreciate how specific and constructive your...
Jan 4, 2026
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I’m also a newer writer, so take this with a grain of salt — but right now this reads more like a teaser/synopsis than a fully lived-in...
Jan 4, 2026
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@IGEN Not gonna touch this because I'd just be repeating what is already said by others. But what I will do is offer a big piece of...
Jan 4, 2026
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Jan 3, 2026
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Hi everyone! ? I’m a new writer and I recently started working on a dark fantasy / action / emotional story. I’d really appreciate...
Jan 3, 2026
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Thanks for the insights! I agree—writing what I’m best at matters most, and mystery should intrigue rather than confuse. I’m aiming for...
Jan 3, 2026
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My protagonist is both ruthless and easy to understand, yet his past remains the biggest mysteries in the book, that keep my readers...
Jan 3, 2026
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I prefer you just write what you are good at. Don't let readers dictate all the things you do.
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Hi everyone! I’m currently working on a dark fantasy thriller with heavy action and mystery. I wanted to ask: Do you prefer a silent...
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