Recent content by HydraScribe_1

The novel is about a kitsune, with a gremlin personality. I have 19 chap in. I was looking for a honest feedback or review. it has smut tag on it but it is not a porn novel either. Note: Please give a constructive feedback not just 'Bad' or 'Good' or 'didnt like'. I am also down for a swap...

I can see that you have lots in your plate. If dont mind and have time, please check out my new novel. Still trying to get the hang of it, so any feedback will be appreciated.

dunnow if you ever get to me, but can you peek and give me feedback on my second novel ? (im sending chapter3 as 1 and 2 were prelude)

Can you please give me your thoughts? :geek:

Thanks in advance <3

good point. Imma take your advise about the name use in there.

As the title say, am I doing too little of 'Show dont tell' ? I have been going over and over the first 20 chapters editing daily (yes, im that kind of person who gets the itch as soon as i feel something is wrong). Can you please read however many paragraphs / chapters you want, and tell me if...

Lol nah, it was like just put the languages in a blender and see what I get. :ROFLMAO:

Loll they are French, Arabic and a local that sounds and writes suspiciously like ancient Greek lmaoooo :LOL:

Man i keep missing these. Being a new author with english as fourth language is pretty hard *Cries* T_T

Ahh late yet to another awesome reviewer T_T

Thank you Kurayami <3

Hello, new author here. I am not sure if this is fine, my work is written by me. I used gpt to spot grammatical only as english isnt my first language. If that is fine, please review my work and give me any constructive feedback so I can get better. If not, sorry for the bother and have a wonder...

Hi! Im a new author so any feedback is much appreciated. Thanks.

wow this is soo much detailed that im shocked and happy at same time. Thank you for spending time from your precious day to view it again. I especially liked that idea of someone walking in. As to not break the established narrative (since the next 4 chapters are mostly about the hook and her...