Recent content by HouseDelarouxScribbles

Oh! I can see the direction of the story! The 'questioning protagonist' is a good start to the story, I do have two things which pop out to me, in that the people here react with some abnormalness: The Officer Who Tells Him To Get Back To Base - This one feels off to me, because the guy did a...

Ah, that's a good question! From the author's side, no, I don't think there should be any restrictions in how the author customizes the systems. That's how you get fun things like "being a gigachad increases your cultivation level". I think it more affects reader's expectations because the...

Oh heya, I have read the first chapter of your work! On a personal note, I enjoy conspiracies, the first two chapters seem to be the buildup for the main character and setting the background for the story, so instead of going into depth, I'll give you some initial impressions instead! The...

Oh hey, I liked reading the story, and read a little past the prologue! Since you asked me about the prologue, I thought it was well-written; the emperor has a lot of points where you did well in casting him as a villain. I liked the little contrast in size between the lackey and him, the...

I think that for the context of the scene (a fight within a controlled environment), it felt about right. It is a training fight between a person who punches and a person who uses a staff. I like the battle commentary, it gives some insight into why the actions are happening though it starts to...

It is an interesting work, since when I read the first chapter, I manually replayed a lot of the feedback I received for /Conspiracy/ Girls, since they seemed to mirror my thoughts on your work and have some similar points to the other suggestions you received earlier. Since you asked for...

What a very strange story! I felt strangely compelled to read it until the end! I find that there is 'weight' behind the story, and perhaps that is the strongest part of it all. Make no mistake, this is a dark story, the main characters frequently engage in violence and don't pretend to be...

I'm literally /here/ though! (laugh) I have always been here, though I do not post much in the other sections besides here! :blob_cookie:

Heya Giantfrog, this is an interesting read, though I must admit I didn't make it past chapter 2, not because I am a Mxtxrxla guy (laugh), I actually thought the premise of it is intriguing! I think that there are improvements that could tighten up the writing and make it more appealing. One of...

It seems that I am too late to write an evaluation since the author has quit writing. It is a difficult ask, since evaluating this asks for knowledge of AI, experience of working with people who learned English as a second language, and literary comparison at the same time. In general, I find...

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