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Cheers. Thank you for the kind words. And yes both tags are correct.

O magnifique one. Wouldst though grace this mere mortal with some of your wisdom https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1667370/creature-feature/

A reader wouldn't think like that though. He would take in the chapter as a whole unless something really egregious stood out to him. A critic would go over the piece multiple times to gather the pain points. But it is fine, I get the gist.

I think writing notes of your observations is fine but it's best to do that for a second run through as you then are concentrating on your observations only and not on the story told. PS: Even so much obliged PS 2: No it isn't exactly today's world but closer to something between ww1 and ww2...

Heyo maestro, may I interest you in a tasty snack. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1667370/creature-feature/stats/

Cheers, I'll take that criticism with a stiff upper lip. Much obliged. PS: Yes a sort of dreamscape meeting aspects of the self. Just all those aspects are very real and physical in their own way.

O mighty one, could you kindly spare a few minutes to give feedback on the following chapter: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1667370-creature-feature/chapter/2138524/ Much obliged by the way

O magnifique one. Wouldst though grace this mere mortal with some of your wisdom. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1667370/creature-feature/

Ahh cheers. Something to keep in mind for the future

I had to manually edit the latest chapter. All the spacing had vanished making it one big blob of text

Yeah I couldn't figure out what went wrong. So i am manually correcting it

I'm unable to get proper spacing in the latest chapter I posted. More like no spacing actually. Is there something my ignoramus self should be made aware of? PS: Any help is greatly appreciated.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1667370/creature-feature/ Here be a boring isekai power fantasy served up to my fair maiden for her enjoyment.

A very terrifying link I've been told but it's safe https://1drv.ms/w/c/38c795050893b76a/IQCST3xw8DNHRqjPinFG-jlwAbL3aFuaLS--QfI5ZD4uMlE?e=piQIOL It's just a small rewrite. I'd be supremely grateful if anyone checks it out

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1667370/creature-feature/ Hit me harder Daddy. Whoa No no you misheard, my name is Dah Dee. Ps: Much obliged for taking some time out for this. I don't mind the lambasting being public or private.