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    Who is artist can push their limits draw something awesome

    No definitely not https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/132012/seekers-codex-beyond-the-abyssal-line Wym?
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    Who is artist can push their limits draw something awesome

    All I have to say is that if you love any anime, give my first chapter a read, and let's talk. I'm trying to make my novel translate into Webtoons. Yes, it's very ambitious, but I'm an ambitious person. ? Let me know what you think. Seeker's Codex: Beyond The Abyssal Line
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    Finally revised my story and posting it bit by bit. I need to know if the first chapter is a good enough hook or no. (Review swap obviously)

    Honestly could be in a different world, especially if your gonna be in that city for awhile, and make it feel Houston unless you want it to be in Houston lol. But it's a great start I would just update setting?
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    I just revised my whole story?Seekers Codex: Beyond The Abyssal Line

    I appreciate new feedback for my story; this forum has been invaluable, and I've gained new readers. I would love to hear both positive and negative opinions about the story so far, including what you like and dislike. Yes, some aspects are vague because I'm aiming for over 1000 chapters, so I'm...
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    Magic System Feedback?

    Sorry for late response and thank you for feedback, I had to do a whole revision because I knew it was a little more complex, and I wasn't far enough in the story at the time to say to much about “Muti”, I bringing something new to the table. Muti isn’t just a “magic system” — it’s the...
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    Magic System Feedback?

    ⚙️ MUTI SYSTEM — STRUCTURE, LAWS & PRACTICE 1. Definition Muti = Soul + Choice + Memory → Output. It’s not “mana” or “energy”; it’s a soul-driven force shaped by intention and discipline. The story repeatedly stresses that every strike, technique, or aura burst reflects the user’s mental and...
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    Seeker’s Codex: Beyond The Abyssal Line

    Thank you so much, I did tell myself my first 2 maybe 3 chapters I gotta revisit cause it’s different from the rest of my chapters(you’ll notice), cause I think was confused on how to start the story I had the idea in my head just not dialogue wise ?. But again I wanted to have my own...
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    Seeker’s Codex: Beyond The Abyssal Line

    Where to start? Hunter × Hunter exam precision + JJK moral pressure + Mistborn-style hard rules and a sense of One Piece Adventure. Four rookies. One brutal Seeker Exam with non-lethal rules and referees that catch everything. If Kai Xander’s Bodhi flame slips, it heals—or burns—what he...
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