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Offering feedback on the first chapter of your story (No Smut)
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I really appreciate you taking the time to read this, particularly as it is quite a bit longer than most chapters solicited for feedback...
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I skimmed the rest of your chapters, and I think my main takeaway here is that lack of tension I mentioned earlier. Good storytelling...
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Before I start, I want to say that this shift from 600 word stories to a 7k word chapter was an undertaking for me. As such, a ton of my...
Yesterday at 9:33 PM
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Here is my submission. I look forward to your comments, suggestions or criticisms. Thank you in advance! :)...
Mar 17, 2026
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Shameless Feedback Thread [OPEN]
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Here is my little work-in-progress. I have 5 chapters completed so far, for a rough total of 30k words...
Feb 28, 2026
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Offering feedback on your first chapter
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Here is my little work-in-progress. I have 6 chapters completed for a rough total of 35k words. Horror it is not, nor really historical...
Feb 23, 2026
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I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it
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Here is my story. Looking forward to hearing back from you. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1083781/sixes-and-sevens/
Feb 23, 2026
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I'll read a couple chapters of your story and give feedback best I can [No Submissions Temporarily (I need to catch up on everyone)]
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Here is my little work-in-progress, I have up to Chapter 5 done so far. I'd love to hear what you think of it...
Jan 22, 2026
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I'm SouthernMaiden, looking to give some Story Feedback while sick with the Flu [Now Closed]
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Here is my submission, I look forward to anything you have to offer... https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1083781/sixes-and-sevens/
Jan 3, 2026
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