Recent content by GwynLordofTinder

This makes it much, MUCH better

I'm launching an isekai at the end of the week, but its 100% western style prose. For me, the reason was as simple as this: if I tried to copy Japanese style, without my thoughts actually being organized into a Japanese lexicon, it would look 'fake and gay', as my nephew might say.

Depending on the tone of your story, this works great. However, if it's heavily character driven, you can treat it like a bottle episode. Its a great chance to explore your characters relationships and psyche, either through comedic road trip shenanigans or concerted introspection.

Yes! Shit, I'm glad its not just me. I was averaged around 1200 then all the sudden dropped to like 700? I think its something up with SH's backend, I've noticed sometimes I'll post a chap, have favorites and comments, but no views somehow.

You've been makin' a lot of horny posts for a guy who doesn't even write smut. I, for one, appreciate the suppport :)

Not the last though, my Grim Works shall live forever

Oh, definitely give your characters distinct prefernences, fetishes, endurance levels. Have the perspective character realize what those are and play with them.

Smut helps! Idk, i get all their stuff off Rule34, and its not like I check often lol that said don't write smut unless you want to, people will be able to tell

Hell yeah! One of the very few that puts some work into the context, then follows through with some truly excellent fuckin'.

For this particular story? The tentacle monster is a kissless virgin with bestial instincts, and his girlfriend is a tentacle fetishist who wants him to try and wear her like a finger puppet, damn the consequences. For their first time, his best friend's psychic girlfriend rides along in his...

I mean, there's the old fallback of watching porn, Nyl2 is the best artist out there for that, my MC's sexual persona is very similar to their character from A Generous Donation. Other than that, you more or less just modify a male perspective. Alongside a male focus on physicality, make sure to...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1667726/amaranthine/ I'm the greatest author who ever lived, proof is above.

Yo! Looking for this kind of feedback on a story I'm launching next month (have 60k words, just getting a bigger backlog for early daily releases.) Trying to decide if I should keep the prologue, or if the first chapter is stronger. Issue is this isnt smut, so i don't want scare people off with...

Sci fi and romance are super popular, your numbers on your first book weren't bad, do what I said with merging them, stay consistent, and I think you'll do fine.

Delete your second book and keep posting under your first story if its a continuation. Starting new works sacrifices most of the progress your first made. My story has 3 books so far, but they're all under the same banner.