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I’d say yes it’s a little long. Not every book needs to end after an amazing climax. Zogarth the guy who writes The Primal Hunter on...

Not everyone obsesses. But I think as a reader more than an author the stats that are most important are number of chapters, # of...

This is not the way to promote your book. Buckle down write more interact with your readers have them favorite and write reviews on your...

blud, the very first sentence has an improper lowercase i "Aughhhh, my head hurts like as if i had been hit by a truck, i thought...

Honestly not really. I mean HP makes it pretty clear that Hogwarts is massive so while the details were obviously different from what I...

The putrid scent of liquefaction.

Same

I got to 900 I don’t think I missed any words cause I didn’t loose focus and try to fill in any blanks. It was pretty difficult though I...

Don’t know how many chapter you have but it might be worth it. If you have at least 50 chapters maybe try with twenty. Do a...

It all depends. As a first chapter you want to draw people in, however, if you go to long it can get to cluttered. I guess all I can say...

This is a weird one. Are you calling the person hit roadkill?

You’re an idiot. You’ve posted five chapters of ONE story you aren’t Tolkien. Especially since you posted three a few months ago and two...

Breathe in and out. In for four hold for four out for four hold for four.

I mean it’s an idea. If you want to have a villain as the protagonist as an anti villain then you’re going to have to walk a very thin...

You could make the second one I Became a Tentacle Monster and drop the rest but it’s not really necessary. The other ones I mentioned...