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Be more concerned with views and ratings. Honestly those stats never made much sense to me either. Also you have 12 chapters guy. Most...

Ouran host club? FMC so reverse harem. And it’s a rom-com. I wouldn’t call it good but it’s okay if a little cliche.

Well first off we can’t give a rating without a post. Moving on from that without knowing more about what the story is about I can’t...

They already mentioned it but sound can be cancelled out if you invert the amplitude basically causing the soundwave to flitter out...

I find the fact you don’t have any backups at all besides whats posted extremely suspicious. You didn’t save one anywhere else?

The mouse isn’t as trigger happy as say the Japanese company that shall not be named that owns the IP for the red plumber the boy in the...

Dolores Umbridge is definitely up there. She’s evil but not kill babies evil. She’s institutional evil the evil that exists because of...

Write out your plot line in bulleted points try to clump them together into logical groups.

“Eyes are the windows to the soul.” Yakusu is right. Take your MC’s character traits do a deep dive on what colors mean in various...

Blue and gray

Honestly I think complaints about passive/active voice are bullish!t. I’ve been told by teachers and professors for years that I write...

Okay first off you need to change the name of the world. Avalorn? Seriously? I tried to type it in and autocorrect automatically changed...

Honestly not a bad idea but the not remembering anything is kinda a deal breaker. It could also be horror with someone remembering...

Not an author just a long time reader so my opinion might not hold the same weight. In my experience people who post more than one story...

Then I’d take a look at your writing before posting or get a proofreader or editor to read your stuff before posting it.