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    The art of revenge

    Ramsay Bolton was the best thing that ever happened for GoT since season 4. The man was a walking disaster. I love how Sansa Made him eaten by his own dogs, but I prefer the scene where Jon beat him badly
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    The art of revenge

    I thought this section for more general disucssion like this. I tried to delete it and put it to right section, but I can't find a way I used to post in Facebook, and my account often banned by 'supposedly-violation', I thought SH would be the same, just to be safe ?
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    The art of revenge

    Just finished watching I Saw The Devil. That was the best revenge story I've ever seen Not because how brutal the revenge is. Not because how badass the protagonist is. Ofc the film also had it, but only just enough for the sake of story, and not to be glorified My most favorite aspect of it...
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    Critical Damage vs Piercing/Armor Penetration

    So it's like True Damage?
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    Critical Damage vs Piercing/Armor Penetration

    Just been trying out different types of games, and often come across these two terms For criticals, I assumed it to be 200% of the initial damage, but what about Armor Piercing?
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    My work feels boring

    So it's Kumo desu-ga and Tensura-type. Skill tree and class evolution stuff, you know For example: In this story, my MC is orientated to be a fighter, but he doesn't have the physique of a fighter. So the System gives him the ability to find his opponent's weakest point. It's not as simple as...
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    My work feels boring

    Well, I can't. The system is the main concept, if I remove it, then I'll have to rewrite all of it
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    My work feels boring

    So I'm currently working on a story about the System. I've got the concept, I've created detailed character backgrounds, I know how it's going to go and how it's going to end, but the problem is: I don't know how to make it fun to read. Every time I try to make it 'fun', by giving the MC the...
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    Having a problem create an exciting fight scene

    So lately I've been reading a manhwa called Weak Hero (there's also a live-action series from Korea, but it's not as good as the manhwa). Story-wise, it was pretty standard (teenage arguments, bullying, and silly conflicts between groups of thugs). But, it was the fight scenes that drew me in...
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