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[CLOSED] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3
read up to: Little Sister this is an unedited draft. missing punctuation, unformatted, repeatition. bad structure. telling not showing. thought bubbles explaining what literally just happened. Is this a thing now? submitting drafts for reviews? whats the point- greyblob
- Post #206
- Forum: Story Feedback
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[CLOSED] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3
probably not. I'm taking a break after these novels too- greyblob
- Post #205
- Forum: Story Feedback
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if i dont get my promotion after this shit ill be salty af
if i dont get my promotion after this shit ill be salty af- greyblob
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[CLOSED] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3
week has been really busy. read up to: Chapter 5 – Whispers of the night there's a massive drop in quality in this chapter compared to previous ones. not sure why. ive read c4 days ago but im pretty sure im right. quality drop in everything, writing quality, dialogue, flow, structure. It's...- greyblob
- Post #203
- Forum: Story Feedback
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very close to joining the others on my ignore list
very close to joining the others on my ignore list- greyblob
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How many years have you be an active gamer?
back in my days- greyblob
- Post #23
- Forum: Gaming Discussion
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im very confused. this has probably 3 levels of complexity with alts referencing each other...
im very confused. this has probably 3 levels of complexity with alts referencing each other. just useone goddamed account and stop changing your avatars and names- greyblob
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random stuff
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- Post #6,080
- Forum: Community Games
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my scraper has been failing for two days because of this
my scraper has been failing for two days because of this- greyblob
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