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greyblob replied to the thread Writing What have you learned about writing so far in 2026?.that fantasy is in its darkest ages and FL novels are a plague -
First of all, this is the wrong Thread. And you know what? A link to your work would be necessary, dontcha think?
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I asked the librarian if she had any books on paranoia. She said "they're right behind you."
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Alhamdulillah, shounen. I'm glad it helped. Note for everyone here: people make mistakes. Treat our feedback and response to your...
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It's a fanfic, yes, but it's well written with a fun premise. My readers are encouraging me to start writing OG content (1/4 of DEN is...
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greyblob replied to the thread [CLOSED] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3.the one line prose was fluctuting. I noticed it more in later chapters so im thinking you fixed this in earlier chapterd maybe? this is...
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greyblob commented on Assurbanipal_II's profile post.erm
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Thank you everyone!!! :blob_highfive:
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greyblob reacted to ThirstyWater's post in the thread [CLOSED] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3 with
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Thank you for the feedback I really appreciate it. Especially about dialogue that's very helpful. I understand how unclear speakers can... -
greyblob left a message on Juia_Darkcrest's profile.why do you have second most trending novel ive recorded so far. what did you sacrifice
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greyblob commented on Playerkartik's profile post.happy birthday
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greyblob replied to the thread [CLOSED] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3.read up to: Chapter 11 — Strings Attached this suffers from a severe case of LN syndrome. I noticed a large quantity of structrual...
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greyblob replied to the thread Writing How to learn to write?.I'd recommend reading more traditional novels and destructuring their chapters. What is the purpose of the paragraph? What is the point...
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Is this a coincidence? I read two fictions in the feedback section... and found a weakness in the narrative structure related to...
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Hello! Thank you for waiting! Here's the colored version of your chibi!