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@Bimbanana review is up but got merged

I ran out of novels man. nothing on RR and nothing published. it's a shit show. fantasy is doomed

@Rosica can you drop a quick commrnt in the thread my post got merged

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2104691/this-is-how-i-lived-a-postapocalyptic-diary/ edit: Posted too quickly, sudden irl issue...

you can do whatever you'd like i dont mind read up to: Chapter 6: Roll and Action! (Part 2) I like the premise. i like the antihero...

I want to open mine, but plenty of people who want feedback keep creating their own threads and ignores threads created for the purpose...

Ah, I see the issues now. Thanks for that. Looks like a generic Xianxia to me.

That’s fair. I’ll try reading the chapter Macha edited and see if I can pinpoint the AI smell. We can leave it here for now.

>A voice like splitting thunder from a clear sky >each one a swirling vortex of energy dark enough to eclipse the sun >The malice of a...

not sensory no. youre really twisting my hand. i have to bring up examples and im too lazy

its a particular flavor of descriptions/prose

hmm no

its alright i treat all of the clones as a single hivemind. as far as im concerned, they asked for the review together

I dont know if it's ai and i dont really care frankly. all i know is that it has patterns similar to how ai 'types'. that's about it