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Thank you for your review. I appreciate it. As for the sweet mother-daughter scene... well, that's actually been in the previous...

Here is one story to try: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2276316/the-meditations/

This is just my opinion dude, so yeah taste it with a grain of salt or something of that quote. First your setting description is good...

Please try mine, dude. I'd love to hear a causal reader's opinion. This is a nobledark fiction with a motherhood core (the...

You might be right! I was try to wrote it like 'Blam!' but i thought it sound too hard, :sweat_smile: . I intended using onomatopoeias...

Trying to add 'Feedback Giver' to my life achievements.

I don't think I have something to criticize from your work. Maybe just this one here, from your prologue: How come the door made a...

Then perhaps you can give your thoughts on my side story : The Tavern

I am bored and kinda want to try this thing. So yeah, let me look at your goodies I'll poison test them and write my prescriptions or...

Same, MTL are much better nowadays. What SoL are you reading rn? Or any recommendations. It is hard to find good ones in this economy...

My genres I believe I am writing is (Ethics, Philosophy and Tragedy), what I actually wrote (Haha, big gun, war crimes! Haha! Sadness.)...

Second cuz there's a cute girl.

Damn, satan calm down. Please appear later I still need to ask God for a blessing for my exams.

Well, guess who just reached 666 messages. I just thought I'd celebrate it with everyone and express my own enthusiam, especially since...