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anyways, it's relatively hard (in my honest opinion) for me to apprehend that an antagonist can crumble under their own ideologies they held for so long, but I guess it does possible under very specific circumstances (and not being written sloppily just to get along with the "vibes" and shit)...

see, this is where you misunderstood his character. He's NOT an antagonist. He's what is best described as a deuteragonist. Ozai IS an antagonist, even though in the first two book he was sitting in the background. And you're literally skipping over Azula, which is another antagonistic character...

I know, and I'm not confusing anything. You should read whom I replied to, and read my reply. Yes, Zuko can be seemed villainous at the beginning, kept chasing Aang for what he believed that'll earn him Ozai's recognition. But overtime, that erodes as Iroh tempered him to become a better man...

I can't help but to point out that Zuko is not inherently an antagonist. He's at best a foil and at worst a villain. Yes, he chases Aang all around the world, but he was telling himself that catching the Avatar is the least he can do to prove himself in front of his father, Ozai, until he...

You're not cooked, you're burnt Anyways, nothing wrong with your story. It's mostly a matter of preference but you'll get there soon enough with consistent upload

I do both read and write nearly anything I know a lot, but I'll analyze what others do wrong and fix it in my story. And obviously tearing down LitRPG to its barebone

the Sub is for more brush texture and stuff, so not exactly mandatory.

no. You're entirely on your own here.

you can use something like subscribestar

The Horizon Crowns What's going to happen when the author doesn't abide with the common trope of modern fantasy in favor of a prestige drama and traditional epic fantasy solely focusing on the human's thoughts, ego and ingenuity in the world of infinite mana, and the realization where they...

plotter. Because it's actually the best way if you want to do a long-term storytelling

It's a lot of personal preference, but I'd instantly drop it when in the first chapter, the character's dialogue was written in such an immature way that whatever seen in that chapter alone instantly will potentially cheapen the rest of the story itself. And I'm talking about swearing machine...

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generally this is a way to subvert/break the genre itself. Though, if you really want a consistent level up method, just tie it to a dungeon clear.

you can just archive it just in case if you want to come back with that old version or use some part of it