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https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2143036/echoes-of-home/ This is my novel. Please read and tell how you feel as a new reader with no prior engagement. I have taken a few pieces of advice before and improvised somewhat, but I want a fresh look from a new reader. Also...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2143036/echoes-of-home/ This is my novel. Please read and tell how you feel as a new reader with no prior engagement. I have taken a few pieces of advice before and improvised somewhat, but I want a fresh look from a new reader. Also...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2143036/echoes-of-home/ This is my novel. Please read and tell how you feel as a new reader with no prior engagement. I have taken a few pieces of advice before and improvised somewhat, but I want a fresh look from a new reader. Also...

Thanks for your feedback. My novel is going to be in omniscient pov only, but regarding the tips about emotions and showing not telling, I will try to keep more focus on them going forward. Also do read it once again after it reaches 20 chapters, you will be in for a surprise.

While writing a third-person pov writers may tend to break the fourth wall in excitement or while explaining stuff. If it is allowed in your novel then okay, or else please be mindful. Also follow show more than telling, instead of telling how the character is feeling express half in his...

I am currently posting 2 stories. One everyday and one on Sunday

My first was a tom and jerry fanfic in fourth grade. But my parents beat me up for wasting notebook pages. ?

Writing two novels but I will tell about one. A god dies and the members of his church are hunted down and killed. The remaining survivors come back years later for revenge. A thoroughly brutal revenge where they just view their lives as chesspieces to kill more enemies. And that will be the...

Just make a basic draft and keep writing. At the time of editing is when you will have to worry. Just make sure that you yourself are satisfied at the end ?.

Thanks. I got a better understanding now. Most of the sentences are of type 1 in my novel. I would try to mix some of type 2 while editing my drafts. It made a lot of things clearer in my mind. If you find any tips please share. Lets work hard to make the best fiction. I made some changes to...

First of all thank you for reading my story. From your observation it seems that my large winded sentences are hard for readers to follow so I will look into where they could be changed and shortened. And I tried to write the character's thoughts but it seems it came out the wrong way and seems...

Started a new novel a few days ago and thought that at least should get some feedback about how it seems to others. For me it seems perfect but with others help it will be perefction itself. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2143036/echoes-of-home/