Recent content by FRWriter

There are like thousands of programs capable of detecting spelling mistakes. He can use whatever online tool, site, writing program, or AI helper, I don't care. He just needs to pick one.

Aside from that, it's a cool story. Why not turn it into a short story? A couple of chapters would be enough.

This is a feedback thread, not an Update thread. If you want to post Updates or discuss the story, check out the Reader section, though honestly, this Forum is not really suitable for advertising. I'll give it a read when I have some time, but after reading the first chapter, it's neither...

Uff.... Uff.... I like your goal. I read the first chapter, and I just want to give you my honest opinion, analyzing just this one, tiny end of the first major fight scene. To begin with, the result: Scale of 1-10. I'd rate it a 3 out of 10. I like a few ideas, but I hate how they're executed...

I think the LN style is not the main problem. You need to work on grammar... badly. Your sentence structure is not only awkward, but outright wrong... at least in some cases. A tool like Grammarly would work wonders. I also think your language comprehension isn't quite there, as some of your...

That's it. Using AI to correct Grammar and spelling mistakes is fine! A lot of people, including myself (through Grammarly), do it. But when you say "polish," it essentially takes your story as a rough example and then creates it's own story out of it. That could be viewed as generated...

Pretty sure these stories were not deleted because they were mistaken as fanfics, but they were against the content guidelines, specifically, the one I posted below. Glancing at your stories, I'm fairly certain you copied them straight from your AI interface into the SH editor. I can't explain...

The account is already deleted on the main site... not a big surprise considering these were two sentences written by a self-declared author. My grammar sucks, and I constantly make mistakes, but reading that little introduction was so painful that a third of my remaining brain cells (so exactly...

Late to the party :) Definitely what we're all thinking, though, even after the recent changes. 100% sure. Some high(low)lights: Absolute clanker. If this has already been reworked... the original must have been quite... special.

Just a couple of things: The use of — is a sign, but when I started out it was all the rage, and I got used to it. I only recently switched back to ';' Also, with 1 small prompt, you can set a rule for AI never to use — but solely rely on ',' and ';' so you can't judge a story purely on that...

Yes, he is obviously not among those whom I was talking about and knows how to write and how to argue properly, which makes his use of AI even more confusing to me. I was talking about most other generators.

Uhm... you more or less already admitted it. Really, I don't see the use in arguing about it. So I won't "prove" how your story is AI. As much as you can claim it isn't, I can claim it is. Because I work with AI, I can instantly recognize your "narration." Frankly, I don't even mean any harm...

Not willing to be mean or even criticize you, but you constantly grace AI stories with 100-1000-word reviews. I always feel so bad seeing that. You can spot 99% of AI stories because the people writing them are so stupid, they 'create' a grammatically flawless story, but can't write a single...